Plot Thread - Making Amends

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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Metarie » Tue Nov 11, 2014 4:53 am

Though I imagine at some point Ivone and Khayyam will need to have the talk where she makes it clear that his matchmaking attempts between her and Azu won't work.

"I prefer a more mature, experienced man" hint hint type of thing.
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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Metarie » Tue Nov 11, 2014 5:10 am

Happy to do those in a series of short posts
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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Azuel Vyaduka » Tue Nov 11, 2014 8:35 pm

I'm pretty sure I assumed at least once that Khayyam was alive during the Gala, which was two years later or so? I could check for that and edit it away if I need to, though it might be difficult because his grandfather's death might change a bit of Azuel's worldview? Not sure, really. These time shenanigans are confusing.

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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Metarie » Tue Nov 11, 2014 9:15 pm

Agree. I think his death comes after the bombings
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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Kitan » Wed Nov 19, 2014 10:43 pm

Sorry for the wait. I have been trying, but Azuel can be difficult to post for and I've been swamped with college lately.

I've also been trying to decide if I should retcon things such that Azuel is caught in the Gala blast rather than his sister. No immediate relevance and I should probably just go with what I've got buuuuut I've never liked heaping all directly negative effects of something to NPCs and the Gala has mostly done that.

Assuming nonmagic, what kind of prosthetics does Marn have anyways? I guess assume that he looses parts of his lower jaw?
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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Metarie » Fri Nov 21, 2014 3:07 am

No worries! Post when you can
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Re: Plot Thread - Making Amends

Post by Metarie » Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:13 pm

I'll work with it, but Ivone was going to leave, that's why she was heading to the stairs.
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