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Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:08 pm
by Steven J Matthews
Player Name: Joshua Kyle Trudell

Character Name: Steven Joshua Matthews

Age: 27

Race: Half-Gnome ( Gnomish Mother / Human Father )

Physical Description:
  • Eyes: Greyish Amber
    Hair: Short White
    Skin: Swarthy
    Height: 4'0"
    Weight: 50 lbs.

            Steven stands at an intimidating four feet tall, and weighs close to fifty pounds. He has stark white hair due to several of his mother's intellectual mishaps, and a swarthy complexion due to a large amount of time under the sun. His hair is half an inch long, kept in no particular style, and he also has a full goatee which he maintains at a neat quarter inch. He sports a pair of denim pants, a thick cotton shirt, cotton socks, and amber leather ankle boots that match his greyish amber eyes.


Possessions:
  • 37 Bishani

    Pocket Multi-Tool & Army Knife
    • - Claw Hammer
      - Eraser
      - Knife
      - Pencil
      - Pliers
      - Saw
      - Screwdriver
      - Straight Edge
      - Tape Measure
      - Wrench
Strengths:
  • Mechanic
    • - due to the years under his mother's tutelage, Steven has a decent understanding of mechanics, and can also invent, and try to modify, or repair very basic mechanical technologies.
    Street Smarts
    • - after spending many years working odd jobs on the streets, Steven has picked up a very innocent set of street smarts.
    Cardiovascular
    • - because of spending a good deal of years running packages around town, Steven is able to run at a normal pace, but can run for a sustained time several times without rest.
Weaknesses:
  • Curious (Mechanic)
    • - because of the nature of inventing mechanical devices, Steven's curiosity caries into other parts of life, and can easily land him in trouble. (It is a weakness because he doesn't have control over it, unlike if he were inquisitive to mechanical devices.)
    Fast Metabolism (Cardiovascular)
    • - due to having a smaller body for his race, and spending a lot of time burning off energy, he has improved his metabolism to the point where he needs a lot of food to sustain himself, and will take major losses to his performance if he is unfed.
    Overconfident (Street Smarts)
    • - after spending years on the street with no major negative situations, Steven has become quite overconfident in his skills, and my jump into something over his head without thinking.
History:
  •         Steven was born, and raised in Marn. His gnomish mother was a fairly well recognized gnomish engineer, and he has no memories of his human father. He was raised solely by his mother, and although she was out working a lot, Steven still had a strong relationship with her. All he knows of his father is that he was his mother's lover for only a short time, and left before he even knew she was pregnant.

            At a young age Steven's mother started teaching him what it is to be a gnome, and what it is to be a mechanic. Soon though they discovered that his human side didn't allow for him to use the same magic as his kin, and so he started trying to find a way to build as well as his kin without the need for their innate magic. Even at the age of twenty seven, he still can't match the quality of his gnomish kin's work even in the most basic of mechanics.

            Over the years Steven learned a lot by performing odd jobs while his mother was away at work, and learned quite a bit about city life. He quickly found work transporting small packages within the city for those who didn't want to pay a lot on magical delivery, or other more extravagant methods. At the age of twenty seven (around the age at which I would consider a Half-Gnome's start of adulthood) Steven set out to look for adventure, leaving his mother to another of her odd lovers, (currently a young dwarfish woman) and her life as a mechanic.
Personality:
  •         Steven is a very liberal guy. Given that he is half gnome, half human he has experienced what it is to be different, and can appreciate what it's like to want to belong. The handful gnomes he encountered over his first twenty seven years were fairly understanding, and his mother of course was a very loving parent. Other races didn't much notice his differences, and just assumed he was an abnormally large gnome as he reached adulthood. On one such occasion, a human merchant offered Steven a fair pay to advertise his exotic wares, by standing and shouting that even a giant gnome found them odd, and rare. He promptly agreed to the deal, and made sure he was paid partially upfront. After a small time as some gnomes passed by, and some other races who had worked with Steven came to realize what was happening. They quickly inquired the merchant as to where he had found such a tall gnome, and as the merchant started weaving some tall tale, Steven made his escape knowing he wasn't to be paid the other half of his wages.

            Steven learned to be a hard worker, and appreciate a good job done from his mother. His mother is a hard working, and well known gnomish mechanic, and instilled these virtues into him from a very young age. Although his mother was a hard worker, she also showed him that play is just as important in a good life. She would often come home with a different lover from week to week (varying in age, gender, and race) and showed him threw example to let loose when you didn't need to be serious. Nearing Steven's coming of adulthood, his mother took him out to a local tavern that was mainly inhabited by gnomes who worked in the Industrial District of Marn. She quickly drank him under the table, and left him to a fun night with a cute gnomish bar maid.
Goals:
  •         Steven's main goal in life is to learn a way to match his gnomish kin in workmanship without having the same innate magic that they use, or by finding a way to obtain his kin's magic. Other than a strong desire to become a great gnomish mechanic, Steven also wishes to set out, and enjoy his life by seeing the world, and having a few adventures like the ones his mother told him, as he was drifting off to sleep as a child.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:54 pm
by Niabi
First of all I'm going to have to ask that you remove those bright colors. Just trying to read this has given me a terrible migraine and I know that a good deal of our members won't read it or they won't wish to write with you if you choose to write in all manner of rainbow colors.

Secondly, you will have to expand on your strengths and weaknesses. I want to know details about them. To what extent is his skilled? What are his limitations?

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:28 pm
by Steven J Matthews
Edited
- I've changed the colour scheme to warmer colours.
- I've expanded on the "Strengths", and "Weaknesses" sections.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:58 pm
by Niabi
I want to see more added to this. The history is short and I'm not getting any feel for a personality out of what you have so far. I want to see more thought put into it to make it feel like a more well rounded individual.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:58 pm
by Steven J Matthews
Edited
- I've added a "Personality", and "Goals" section.
- I've expanded slightly on the "History" section.

I'm not to sure where Thar Shaddin will take my character, so I'd like to leave him open to change. If he's needed as a hard worker he can be, or if he's needed as comic relief he can be, and he does have a history laid out with room for improvisation if needed. I plan to add on to, and edit my character sheet as I roleplay here, and hope this is sufficient to start.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:59 pm
by Niabi
Sorry it's taking me a couple of days to get back to you. The character looks better, I'm considering approving it, I just want to know that your posts will be made in the default white-ish color first.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 3:00 am
by Steven J Matthews
Sorry ..

My norm is posting, and colouring the parts of text differently:
ex. - I slowly walked towards the door. I wondered what could be behind it. I muttered, "Dear God," under my breath.
 - action = red
 - dialogue = blue
 - thought = green
or at least colouring the dialogue differently:
ex. - I slowly walked towards the door. I wondered what could be behind it. I muttered, "Dear God," under my breath.

I understand though if you require me to write only in the default colour, font, and size.
At the very least I'm sure we can compromise. I can keep it to dull colours (so no migraines) the only reason it was originally bright was because I have my brightness set low, and didn't realize what it looked like with a normal monitor brightness.

Sorry we got off on the wrong foot. I do things odd, but I have no problem conforming if it makes sense. :P

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:14 am
by Niabi
I don't want to seem like a bitch but I noticed your example was written in first person and all of our IC posts are done in past tense third person.

So:

He slowly walked towards the door, wondering what could have been behind it. He muttered, "Dear God (or in our setting Changer(s))," under his breath.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:14 pm
by Steven J Matthews
OK .. So ..

- Default colour, font, and size.
- Writing has to be done in past tense.

Got It :D

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:19 pm
by Niabi
And third person, we only write dialogue in first person.

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:53 am
by Steven J Matthews
- Default colour, font, and size.
- Writing has to be done in past tense, and in third person.
- Dialogue in first person, and whatever tense is appropriate.

K! :D

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:57 am
by Steven J Matthews
So?

Re: Steven Joshua Matthews

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:11 pm
by Niabi
Yeah, okay I can approve this. You can now go post in the Characters Available for Plots thread.