Thar Shaddin

Yea, Brokk's up then.

Sorry, currently abroad, but I will endeavour to post as soon as I can.

Ok, np.

Brokk's posted.
I have too -3-
Wonder how Renee is going to explain this to the guards

I was considering having a patrol chase after dear Manny. But I suppose dear Karris could simply put two and two together and come up with the Theory of Everything.

I think the shifting mamba got away again

A Question :

Brokk is hiding behind a Tian Xian Lacquered dressing screen against the far wall. (The screen wobbled in your last post )

Do you imagine Karris heading to the main door and back to the street outside ? Or did you mean that he noticed the wobbling screen Brokk is hiding behind and now he's going there ?

I imagine him heading to the main room, as he didn't hear the door open, but either works really

It'll be interesting to see how this plays out, especially if Karris decides to have a look around.
Maybe in order to rescue Renee from Quirke probing hands I'll bring in an Npc -3-

Constable Karris ... he's on his way!

The tension is insufferable ... dunn, dunn, dunnnnn!

Posted a reply. Sorry it's a bit short, not much to show yet.

I feel I want to check with you before I post.

Manuel found clothes and went home. Karris went back out on the streets.
I guess that could be a natural end for them, in this thread ?

So maybe we should start to wrap up the story now.
We could write a few more post and make an end of the evening for the remaining people; Brokk, Renee and Quirke.
In next post think I'll let Quirke work at his career agenda and let him offer to escort Renee on her walk home

Yep.
Manny has finished his role in this thread and has gone home. So you're right about the natural end, for now.
So wrapping up will be left to you and Brokk
-3-

I'm thinking of my next post for Renee.

I'm not totally sure how to write though. There's several options, so I thought we can have a look at our ideas.

How would you feel like doing with the two saleswomen next? Write them out on the street for more adventures? Take them to Renees home? With or without timeskip? Something else? I know this is very vague of me, but I hope we can clarify it togehter

Also, I feel it could be fun to brainstorm a bit and hash out some ideas, if we want to make more of the budding cooperation.

Well, we need at least one more post to address what happened in the store, but after that we're free to skip ahead a bit. If Renee wanted to see more of her stock or how she operates we could do more in the streets and maybe visit the night market. Or maybe she needs a stiff drink after that ordeal? Eventually we may have to introduce the little old gnome and the various other problems too.

I think we could start with a really stiff drink and see where it leads.