Hey everybody, the name's Raine.

I'll be your local Gadgeteer in Marn, ready to create any sort of tinkertool you can think of for your own amusement. It's a pleasure to meet you all and I look forward to writing with you.

I tried editing it as I could see fit without disrupting the balance of the actual character himself. I appreciate the critique! Still a budding writer.

Anything else you'd like to point out or do you think it's good?

Name: Raine Episcose
Age: Nineteen
Race: Human
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 174 Lbs
Physical Description -
Hair color: Charocal Black
Eye Color: Ivory Green
Skin color: Tanned/Caucasian
Body type: Fit yet balanced, composed of mainly muscle, small body fat.
Additional features: Raine bears calloused hands ...