ok edited again, i'll lookout for run-on lines
APPLICATION EDITED ( think i got everything )

i'v been watching it for a while now its funny

^^ when i was doing it i didn't notice them, stuff like 'the he came to the road' its not gramatical its that i forget to press the 'n' so i'll go read over it and fix the whole thing.

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Player Name: Vladick Scourge
Name: Vladick Scourge
Age: 27
Race: Human
Height: 6'3''
Weight: 13' 5'

Physical Description:
Vladick has pale skin, muscular shoulders with a angular and unattractive face, he wears his hair at shoulder length and tied back so as to keep it from his eyes, a ...