Go fuck yourself you dumbass slut.

Thanks Metarie.

No no, I like it here.

I'm trying to make a character that I want to be in real life but currently can't.

I just got done with the description, now I'm moving on to strengths and such. I'm just taking this step by step.

Am I in the right direction?

Hi. This is my update. I'm definitely not done yet, but do I need to add more for the description?

I'm sorry. I didn't know the standards of this forum until I saw the others. I will revise it as soon as I can.

Name: Viktoricus “The Bear Killer” Fergoozo

Age: 18

Race: Human

Height: 5'6

Weight: 170 pounds

Description:

Viktoricus's body screams power. Everything from his neck down to his calves, they're all built like bloated stone. Although short and light (5'6, 170 pounds), his body packs the ...