Gallus crept through the woods, one foot over the other, eyes open. His bow was in hand, an arrow sitting easily within reach in his quiver. It was a cold day, this got to him, it made him feel guilty...about anything he was doing. He froze,
'Nice on.'
He whispered quietly to himself, he saw that ...

I've added some more details to Gallus's bio. Note he is now from Tian Xia. Let me know if there is anything else I should change!

Name: Gallus Vastel
Age: 43
Race: Human
Height: 6”1
Weight: 160lb

Physical Description : Gallus is a fairly plain-faced human, he has dark brown hair and grey eyes, no noticeable markings on him save an old scar that runs from above his left eye to the same corner of his mouth. He typically wears ...