Thanks for taking a look. I think I've addressed everything.

Bump- If Saruna is away, could someone else take a look?

Okay, I've added a pretty big plot point into his history which explains why he doesn't make friends, as well as why he left shim.

Bump (Its been three days, I believe that I am allowed to bump my thread once every three days. If i am wrong, correct me.)

Thanks for taking a look at my app ^.^
I fixed all of the things that you mentioned, unless I missed something. I also added a bit more depth to his history, regarding the reason that he worked for so long and so diligently.

Player Name: Thaddeus
Name: Thaddeus Brooker
Age: 39
Race: Human
Height:6'2''
Weight: 98 KG
Physical Description: As far as blacksmiths go, Thaddeus really is a stereotype. He is rather tall and thick, with black hair and a beard. Despite His age, he looks quite youthful, although he far from feels ...

Hey guys, I am Thaddeus, or rather that is what I plan on naming my character. Usually (on other forums) I am called MrJaffa or Jaffa, so if you wanna call me that, feel free. I'll get my app up soon, but I figured that I may as well introduce myself first. I'm an intermediate roleplayer, so I'm ...