Ok thank you I shall begin to edit.

As he takes in the sites, Sir Gavin sighs at the perfect decision, his choice to move to this, his new home town, he passes some people, who don't really pay much attention to him, who he waves too, none wave back, feeling anxious and needing to make some friends, the 28 year old, Elven warrior ...

(Hello I'm new to this type of RP so please PM me tips)

Sir Gavin The III

RACE: Elven
AGE: 28
SEX: Male

LOOKS:
Gavin is a majestic, dignified man. He is a tall, lean, medium muscles (stronger than the average person though not over powered) with medium-long straight blonde hair, in a way ...