sorry about that, i've always been kinda of a person who takes things to literally and doesn't get sarcasm, but anyway I've completed all of the changes you've said and if their is anything else you can tell me to change just tell me.

Ok, changed that and sorry for making it over complecated as you can see I not the best when it comes to profiles. Anyway moving on, I changed the reasons why the family left (turns out why they were rich was because his father was a black market trader) and cheated someone who then threatened to ...

I changed up the bio and added a bit more to as well, I also gave him consitering what he's went through posttraumatic stress disorder. (Read more here to see if you think it fits well http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Post-traumatic_stress_disorder )

Also I added why he's coming here and more about ...

Name: Raven Kilrisk
Race: Human
Age: 22
Height: 6'2
Weight: 215 pounds
Theme: "Europa"- by Globus

Appearance:
Raven seems like your average person in a crowd and that's how he likes it. He has a normal height with light brown hair and has predator like green eyes. He is trimmed and muscled ...