I have been looking at other characters and i'm starting to see what you mean. I'll do my best and hopefully i'll be able to make something great

Hi everyone I'm actually fairly new to role-playing in general, but I have a lot of ideas and even more free time. Hopefully i'll finish my character soon, I can't wait to start playing.

Thanks for the welcome I've cleaned it up a bit and added the things I missed, but it's still open for changes if necessary. It will still be a few days at the very least before i'm happy with the history.

I'm omitting the history for now. I'll be working on it for at least a week or so, i want it to be good. But until then, I would appreciate any and all feedback on the character. Thanks :)

Name: Valik & Grave

Age: Judging by appearance alone, he seems to be in his mid-20’s / around 8

Race ...