Welcome, Chris! Thank you for the application.

As you've seen in the other applications, we do require an application to be written out more extensively. We don't really allow applications that are lists of traits, as it doesn't really tell us anything about who the character is, where they come ...

Don't worry, Mandy. You can keep an unfinished application around for as long as you want. We don't delete them or anything like that.

Whenever you're ready to come back and finish it, you can do so. And once you're ready for review, just post in this thread again to let us know. Or message a mod ...

Sorry for the late reply! February has been an excessively busy month for me and other mods.

Thank you for the reply and the changes you've made so far. Let me know when you've made the rest of the changes and I'll review the app again.

One more thing, that I didn't mention last time. You'll need ...

Hi, Jerek and Forgotten. Welcome to Thar. Good luck with your writing and let me know if you need anything.

Hi, Jerek! Welcome to Thar Shaddin and thank you for the application. There are a few things I'd like to see further explained or adjusted.

I'll begin by saying that the length of the app is good, and I can see you've put some thought into your character. I appreciate that the character is a ...

(14:16:57) Porter: Katona logs into the Chat.
(14:20:06) Porter: Kitan logs into the Chat.
(14:20:15) Kitan: Wait no I need to keep studying
(14:20:17) Porter: Kitan logs out of the Chat.

In the next post or two they'll head through the town and meet up with some of Sorin's family at the Peyton farm, unless you want to do anything else first. We can have a dialogue to flesh out the family characters and their experiences with the monster, with a few hints at things being more than ...

Hi Kaitlin! Thank you very much for your application.

Unfortunately, you must be 16 or older to join this community. If you'd like to see the rules on this, you can find them here: http://www.tharshaddin.com/rules/Adult_Content

If you have any questions or concerns, you're welcome to contact the ...

Welcome to Thar Shaddin, Meron! Thank you for the application. This review might seem a little long, but don't worry -- I'm just going to be addressing in some detail the different aspects off the application so you can get a better sense of what we're looking for.

My first impression from this ...

Hey, Ophelia! Welcome to Thar Shaddin and thank you for the application.

It's preferable to have the History section at the end of the application, but this is just for consistency with other apps. I'll address the History first, however.

After losing her family at a young age

How did she lose ...

Welcome, William!

Hi Fenris/Tero! Welcome to Thar Shaddin and thank you for the application.

Unfortunately, this application doesn't meet our standards. I recommend you take a look at our Rules , New Player Guide , New Character Guide , and Setting to get a better idea of what we're looking for. You should also ...

Welcome, Ryan.

Overall concept:

(17:40:47) Katona: Maybe that forest hunting monster thread idea.
(17:41:08) Kitan: Well, Drifel remains a solid choice for any hunt
(17:41:23) Katona: Yes, that definitely sounds awesome.
(17:41:35) Kitan: What kind of character did you have in mind for this kind of thing?
(17:41 ...

Availability: PM Katona or Kitan (or ask in this thread) if you're interested in joining.

Posting Speed: Every 1-3 days with a 5 day maximum waiting time.

Characters Involved: Drifel , Sorin

Thread starting date: 122PW, TBD

Location: Shim & Virdara Woods http://www.tharshaddin.com/rp ...